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Challenge: Empty Room II (Advanced Editing VII*)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: basement
Date: Apr 17, 2011
Aperture: 18
ISO: 100
Shutter: 25sec
Date Uploaded: Apr 19, 2011

[Apr. 25th, 2011 03:43:00 PM]
Still in voting, just to leave a comment myself :). I'm glad this one is well received. The idea was to make the mouse trap look a bit camouflaged, or more like lurking in the shadow on the floor. There was a thought of leaving the color of the cheese (there is a bit of cheese in there), but I wasn't sure. The long shutter speed - well, no real explanation, I guess that would be some lasting impressions of the Weston challenge :). It's daylight of a not very bright Sunday. The windows are high near the ceiling.

Thank you Bear_Music for sharing (in another discussion), the processing ideas used here.
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Wow, top 10, thank you for your votes!

I was going to shoot a bonsai tree in this environment but as I was cleaning up, I almost stepped on this old mouse trap.

The pp - created a color image first with a layer of SEP in Luminosity mode. However, the color patches on the wall and pipes seemed distracting, so I applied SEP again. Combined with the Luminosity layer, this brought up the textures really nicely. Then, there was a touch of Gaussian blur on the shadows. Other than that, some curves adjustment, spot healing brush for cloning out some stains and Luko's sharpening on the final resolution. The idea of leaving color on the mouse trap or the cheese seemed too fancy :).

Statistics
Place: 9 out of 53
Avg (all users): 6.3278
Avg (commenters): 6.5556
Avg (participants): 6.0333
Avg (non-participants): 6.3697
Views since voting: 1623
Views during voting: 467
Votes: 241
Comments: 11
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04/27/2011 01:56:40 AM
Love it. Congrats on the top 10
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/25/2011 11:46:39 AM
Ubiquitous. Good image.
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04/24/2011 01:25:49 PM
Catches the mouse or bigger game.
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04/24/2011 08:33:03 AM
Hey, an object that actually belongs in an empty room! Amazing!
Cheekiness aside, this was one of my faves from the challenge. No suggestions, really. Nice submission.
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04/21/2011 08:35:56 PM
critters in trouble!! great shot
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04/21/2011 12:05:29 PM
You might need a bigger trap...

Great mood here.
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04/21/2011 04:44:39 AM
this is a mouse trap
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04/20/2011 03:45:54 PM
Funny. Good contrast and lighting. Wish their was a little yellow piece of cheese just inside. :-)
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04/20/2011 02:18:37 PM
I like how the B&W conversion has really made the details stick out.
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04/20/2011 01:54:40 PM
Love the tones a lot. The mouse trap needs to be a little brighter to draw the eye to it more since it is a key element in this photograph. Currently I am drawn to the pipes in the background. Still very good image and it should do well. 8!
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04/20/2011 01:00:30 PM
Love the texture in this but would like to see more empty room. Good luck.
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