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| 08/20/2009 02:39:44 PM |
Freedom: A Photographic History of the African American Struggleby brianlhComment by Ecce_Signum: Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club
First Impression: Yup, I think your comments say it well, "not the best shot aesthetically". For me this is little more than a snapshot somebody might take of the monument rather than trying to convey the story behind the book.
Composition: Whilst your main subject (the guy on the bench) is well placed in the frame I do think the background takes away much of the impact of the shot and (for me) this would have worked better as a much tighter crop on the monument
Subject: I think and dnmc voters would be pretty mean to think any image doesn't match the book title so yes, this meets the challenge for me but the image wouldn't make me pick up the book to read.
Technical: Your sole commenter mentioned the harsh light and is quite right, The guy on the bench appears almost in shadow on my monitor and I'd have liked to have seen more of him. Focus is ok and I can read most of the writing on the monument.
Final thoughts: This probably scored about right in the challenge but with a little more care and time am sure this could have been much better (though understand your reasons for not hanging around lol). |
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