Jack in the Box
by PaulinaRD

Comment by Di:
cute puppy, try to get his attention next time to get more of his face towards you. I like how sharp his face is and the basket hes in. VERY good job !!

Jack in the Box
by PaulinaRD

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings....

This photo is a nice profile shot, but there are a few issues that you should consider here... 1. The background is a little powerful for the subject. There are a lot of strong lines and contrasts there that make the image a bit 'busy' overall. 2. The image is a little soft in some key areas, probably due to a shallow depth of field aperture setting on the camera. 3. The light provided by the flash is creating a lot of harsh contrast in the image.

Without the title here, i would have trouble determining that this dog is in a box with this tight composition.

After School Snack
by PaulinaRD

Comment by nsbca7:
Lose the on camera flash. Takes so much away from what you are trying to capture.

After School Snack
by PaulinaRD

Comment by tristalisk:
I'm sure that the separaion in this shot has somthing to do with penut butter and jelly. I Think however that im missing it. I also feel that better lighting would realy have helped this shot. You hace a glare on the side of the models head, and the denim, shirt, bottle and table all seem to have no contrast. They all seem to meld together. The lighing makes this overall good shot feel like just another snap shot.

After School Snack
by PaulinaRD

Comment by srbrubaker:
Apologies to the person who took this shot has a number of opportunities for improvement. The big space around the subject is really uninteresting. The condiments are distracting. And if you have to use a flash inside to get the shot, you probably should light the space differently. (The flash is an evil conspiracy by the Uglification Society to ruin the photos of everybody who is not schooled to use them only under seemingly irrellevant condions.) You chose a subject who could be quite photogenic.

After School Snack
by PaulinaRD

Comment by mar10029:
Separation? Where?

After School Snack
by PaulinaRD

Comment by saiphfire:
I don't understand the articulation of the theme.

Mom's baby
by PaulinaRD

Comment by ahaze:
a cute snapshot

Mom's baby
by PaulinaRD

Comment by moswyn:
Picture seems over-sharpened. A nice family snapshot, but not "frame-worthy".

Mom's baby
by PaulinaRD

Comment by vtruan:
appear to be to oversharpened to me