Magic Bus
by jhart71

Comment by scrum8:
The lighting on the left sees a bit brutal. I think I would have cropped out the windshield.

Magic Bus
by jhart71

Comment by orussell:
Classic van dude(dudette). Your compositon could have been less symetrical. I think that would have made it more interesting. The glare on the windshield is very distracting and you have colour cast. This is easily fixed in an image editor: In levels select black, gray, and white points with eye dropper tool - fool with it til you get a good ballance - then unsharp mask 125%, radius 0.3, threshold 1 - I tried it and it works very well. Contact me after the challenge and I'll send you the editted copy if you like.