First Entry
by jhaustin00

Comment by johnmcboston:
Hey, thanks for entering. Composition isn't bad. But your main subject is out of focus. If it were crisp it would have complimented the background with some 'depth of field' creativity. Not sure if some lighting work would have done anything... This looks more like a snapshot than a photograph. Looking forward to seeing your next entry.

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by jhaustin00

Comment by Catherine_B:
Not bad for a first attempt - if that is what I understand from your title. Image is a little blurry for my taste, but overall the composition and lighting are very good.

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by jhaustin00

Comment by Shrink:
Keeping object sharp is a prerequisite to score high. Still couldn't figure it out though!

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Comment by okiesisi:
it looks like a childs toy. it might be better with the focus on the gold circle.

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Comment by KarenNfld:
No idea. That looks like window blinds in the background, this is either a light source or has a light shining in it. I wish it were sharper.

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Comment by Eyesup:
focus seems to need work on this one

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Comment by Omni:
Haven´t the slightest idea of it - good and creative

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Comment by WriteHeart:
It seems out of focus to me. I don't even know what to guess?

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Comment by cwainwright:
the background kinda looks like bellows, not sure what the item is in the foreground. It's a little blurry, though.

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by jhaustin00

Comment by SoulMan1978:
a bit out of focus :-(