Old 'N' Broken Down
by SeaSail

Comment by ShutterPug:
** Greetings from the Critique Club **

Cropped a bit tightly, and a little too dark in my opinion. I like the way the light was casted upon the ladder, but the sun spots are a bit much.

- Linda

Old 'N' Broken Down
by SeaSail

Comment by Jeileen:
Difficult to tell what this is . . . shadows are also distracting. 3

Old 'N' Broken Down
by SeaSail

Comment by jseyerle:
Lighting is bad. Takes away from the shot

Old 'N' Broken Down
by SeaSail

Comment by dahkota:
It took me a few minutes to figure out what this was. The lighting does not help at all. The crop is awkward, leaving me bits and pieces but I can't tell what is the focus. This could be reshot, maybe on an overcast day to get rid of the hots spots, maybe with the photographer on a more even plane with the ladder. This would give a clearer view of what you as the photographer saw. 3

Old 'N' Broken Down
by SeaSail

Comment by kmbr2001:
what a masterpiece! 10

Independence from Routine
by SeaSail

Comment by kmbr2001:
amazing photo!!! Great model, great composition, great color, great photo, great great great great!!!!

Independence from Routine
by SeaSail

Comment by lissylou:
I don't understand the connection to the title

Independence from Routine
by SeaSail

Comment by Jutilda:
I wish this were more rich and not so yellow. Maybe bring up the gray tones a bit more. The light on her cheekbones is nice and the use of negative space works for me. Maybe crop out part of the left side just a smidge.

The Only Circle With an End
by SeaSail

Comment by CalliopeKel:
Strange.

The Only Circle With an End
by SeaSail

Comment by Man_Called_Horse:
We all know what the challenge title is. It is too bad that you could not take the time to be more creative with your titleing.

nice comp, too dark, can't tell what to look at, top lighting ok, bkacks ok, whites need work, color flat, nice shadowing, nice texture, overall could of been better