Saturday surprise
by ctownsen357

Comment by ineedauniquename:
I get it but I'm afraid for me the composition doesn't work. The black wossname (piano?) isn't really helping and the lass top right doesn't add compositionally to the photo. Congratulations by the way?

...but Dad, it's clean mud.
by ctownsen357

Comment by Sebi:
Great photo. I think just having the white around the border would be sufficient. The title and oxymoron make me laugh, reminds me of Calvin and Hobbes. I like this :-)

...but Dad, it's clean mud.
by ctownsen357

Comment by glad2badad:
Clean mud is good mud. :D I like seeing where you've placed the focus directly on his feet. IMO the image may be somewhat busy or overcrowded. The shoes probably could go. Tonal range is ok, might be a tad short on both ends (true white and true black) for a B/W photo. All JMO of course. Best of luck to you in the challenge.