He wont Call
by HamstringJones

Comment by jorr:
I really like the thought here, different slant on the challenge. However the low lighting and soft focus really hurts the image. It took me a few seconds to even see what else was there besides the clock. Not knowing what camera you have I can't be sure if this is what happened, but quite a few cameras are unable to focus if you are too close to the item you are photographing. Most voters are very hard on out of focus images. Remember you had a very unique idea for the challenge and that is a big part of the overall package, technical things you can learn, practice and improve much easier than trying to learn creativity which you already have.

He wont Call
by HamstringJones

Comment by scantin:
The image needs a focal point that's in focus - perhaps having the clock numbers in focus? Looks a little underexposed too.

He wont Call
by HamstringJones

Comment by Kivet:
Good idea, just too blury.

He wont Call
by HamstringJones

Comment by Germaine:
Not a bad composition, but something needs to be in focus.