luckythrow
by desmckechnie

Comment by karmat:
I think you need either more blur showing definite motion, or less so that the picture is crystal clear.

luckythrow
by desmckechnie

Comment by Jacko:
How many takes did this take you? (just kidding). Nice simple composition, however it really lacks focus. Maybe use a darker back drop to make the die stand out. Jacko.

luckythrow
by desmckechnie

Comment by GregCamp:
I like the use of black and white. Would have preferred a better focus and more contrast.

luckythrow
by desmckechnie

Comment by irae:
If I were you, I'd take that overexposure on the tops of the dice and run with it. If you've got software with the capability, adjust the left side of the levels slider to make the tabletop and the markings on the dice almost pure black. Otherwise, just jack up the contrast. It won't overcome the soft foucs or less-than-spectacular subject, but it will pull what pop there is out of the image you have.

luckythrow
by desmckechnie

Comment by paynekj:
This would have been very effective, if the dice had been in focus

luckythrow
by desmckechnie

Comment by Dustin:
i like the idea. too much negative space

luckythrow
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Comment by Martin:
focus is very bad. 4-martin

luckythrow
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Comment by justine:
Seem oof to me. I like the compositon, light and tones.

luckythrow
by desmckechnie

Comment by kiwiness:
Double Six. Good luck. Just a tad out of focus though.

luckythrow
by desmckechnie

Comment by kate12303:
They seem out of focus to me.