Play me
by clixographer

Comment by eckoe:
I LOVE the composition. It's very nice, but it's execution, I'd like to see cleaned up. #1, I don't like the desat, B&W or color here would be fine, but the desat isn't right. if you REALLY want to do the desat, desat the guitar, and not the girl. And then do something about the flash on the guitar, light it from the side or something to make that reflection go away. Great start though, and PLEASE reshoot, cause I'd love to see it without the flash at least.

Play me
by clixographer

Comment by Alicia:
The light reflection and the fingerprints on the guitar aren't working for me. Otherwise it's a great concept and composition.

Play me
by clixographer

Comment by spaceman spiff:
The flash reflection on the guitar is VERY distracting and really ruins the picture.

Play me
by clixographer

Comment by adeldegan:
harsh lighting and fingerprints on the guitar are very distracting. Nice idea though.

Play me
by clixographer

Comment by aKiwi:
This could be great if only you hadn't used the on camera flash. The reflection & fingerprints all over the guitar subtract so much from a really great image.

Play me
by clixographer

Comment by kiwinick:
good idea reflections on guitar should have been avoided

I kissed a girl
by clixographer

Comment by _eug:
Very flat lighting. On-camera flash?

I kissed a girl
by clixographer

Comment by albc28:
slightly disturbing, but funny.

I don't mean this in a bad way at all, but this looks like a snap shot, not in quality of photo but in composition. the two guys in the background really add to that effect, along with the bar scene. And then you can see that the flash was on and that you were slightly too close. One girl has her eyes closed, while the other one is looking at the camera. Either both looking at eachother, both looking at the camera, or both eyes closed would have been better.