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| 12/04/2005 04:19:47 PM |
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| 12/01/2005 05:52:31 AM |
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| 09/27/2005 11:47:24 PM |
End of summerby IncarlightComment by ShannonLee: i think the border works very weel here. i love the reflection, however the photo seems a little dark. overall nice job 7 |
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| 09/26/2005 10:07:41 PM |
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| 09/26/2005 06:05:13 AM |
Mr and Mrs Rupertssonby IncarlightComment by Art Roflmao: "Make" her smile. I don't think she would mind.
Otherwise, all your edits are great, but if I was the groom, I wouldn't want that pic in the album or on the mantle.
my 2 cents anyway. Good luck. |
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| 09/26/2005 05:54:40 AM |
Mr and Mrs Rupertssonby IncarlightComment by BlackDot: Unless, of course, that IS her happy face. In that case it would be better to include the bottom left of her dress, if it's there. Otherwise it looks good.
A few other hints: It is not only her smile that makes her look uncomfortable. Watch your backgrounds. She is dark brown bark, he is light green. This seperates them. Pose, he is looking straight at you, hands in the crotch. This isolates him, and she is just "with" him. Her head is tilted towards the outside of the frame, not towards him, and she is looking "out" of the frame.
It also feels as if your vantage point is slightly higher than them?
Nice light and processing, and that is one beautifull boquet(sp)! |
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| 09/26/2005 05:45:38 AM |
Mr and Mrs Rupertssonby IncarlightComment by taterbug: I think your edit looks pretty good so far. One suggestion for something to try maybe, is a little tighter crop. Her dress is already cut off at the left, and I don't think the background has any thing significant that you would lose. If you were to crop off some of the left edge, and could even afford to lose a little off the top and bottom, it might add a little bit of symmetry, more of a centered composition and emphasize the couple more. |
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| 09/26/2005 03:45:02 AM |
Naokoby IncarlightComment by MAK: Used to have a wife called Naoko but I traded her in against a younger/faster model.
Seriously though 2 things.. first thank you for the favs and secondly I really like DOF so this shot hit a point with me I also like japanese girls, strike 2.
Keep being cool dude and if/when you hit back Tokyo way PM me and we can shoot out. |
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| 09/26/2005 03:33:24 AM |
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| 09/26/2005 03:16:55 AM |
Mr and Mrs Rupertssonby IncarlightComment by Shecoya: Thanks for posting that. I Like everything you've done to the picture. The cloning didnt stand out to me and i actually had to look to see where you had cloned. The faces in the edit grab your attention more.. over all I really like the picture. There is an absolute contrast in moods in their individual faces.. I hope her choice to marry him brings about a few more smiles than what her face is saying in the photo... ;)
You may have captured the very essence of their relationship... time will tell :) |
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