missing piece
by csl_click79

Comment by waou85:
A bit too chaotic and out of focus slightly. Try different lighting maybe? IMHO

missing piece
by csl_click79

Comment by Camabs:
It's hard -if not impossible- to make a pleasant composition from things still in the box. I think you should have taken them out. That would also help the viewer to see there are only seven pons. Some of the whites are slightly blown in the picture and the whites have a blue cast, indicating that your WB is incorrect.

missing piece
by csl_click79

Comment by evansydney:
There doesn̢۪t seem to be any part of the image particularly sharp, this distracts from the image

what the nature can offer
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Comment by Yo_Spiff:
A nice beach scene, and though it fits the Wabi-Sabi concept, it does not scream it to me. I think that may be because the subject is the perfect blue water and not the dilapidated little shack.

what the nature can offer
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Comment by LoveSpuds:
For me the composition lets this image down. Placing the palm in the center of the image has almost split the image in two and then the boats and hut just look 'messy'.

Its a shame because there is a lot of potential here. Perhaps moving to the right and making more of the tired (but quite interesting) old hut (which may have hidden some of the inflatables on the shore).

what the nature can offer
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Comment by Mike_Adams:
Lots of places for my eye to go here. The leaning hut is really really distracting to my eye. The overhanging palm is also distracting to me as well. I think if you want an overhanging palm I would put more of it in the frame so the viewer knows it is an important part of the image not just a palm that got in the way of a snapshot. Same thing with the shadows from the palm in front of the camera. Either more so its deliberate or none at all.