"Pride" Is there any sin she doesn't committ
by sherin0426

Comment by Jammur:
Good idea done in a somewhat average fashion.
Your composition and lighting are good.
Color seems a bit flat and plastic (of course they are plastic), but they lack the vividness of the 'pink asile' Perhaps WB adjustment would help.
I know how tough it is when you use one piece of cloth for background and also covering your table, but the wrinkles are a big problem here. Either try to get the backdrop further behind your subject or iron your sheet.
Also a shallower DOF would help. 5

Youth
by sherin0426

Comment by jgrieco:
try tighter to face

looks like tough lighting conditions

Youth
by sherin0426

Comment by wehrmacher:
Very nice smile on a lovely young lady. I think I would have moved in a little to increase the focus on her face. I like the juxtaposition of her smooth soft warm skin and the cold, rough, hard tree's bark. You could have used a little something to soften the light on her forehead and blond hair.