Do The Melons Still Grow In The Pale Moonlight?
by mefnj

Comment:
Looks like a painting done in pastels on black. How did you get this effect? Nice gritty texture.

Human Firework.
by LunaMoon21

Comment:
Looks like you're referencing a 007 movie.

Electric Guitar
by nickyb

Comment:
This is the part in the movie where lightning strikes the guitar and it suddenly comes to life!

Electric Guitar
by jbirkman

Comment:
Creative use of light. Helps to emphasize the electric component of the guitar. Love the composition.

Pelicans à la scrap
by Beetle

Comment:
Interesting subject matter. Implies a story of cyborg pelicans coming to the city, discussing their plans to take over the world. My only nitpick (and this might sound incredibly nitpicky) is if you angled it ever so slightly more, so the slight shadow line on the right edge of the picture on the water is cropped out, it would give the water a greater sense of three-dimensionality and give the pelicans a greater sense of space in relation to the bridge.

lumière magique
by PennyStreet

Comment:
A slight angle, either from the top down to see the interesting patterns comming from the light through the bottom of the glass, or just slightly to the side would help bring out the texture of the glass. Right now it's an interesting shape, but looks flattened with texture instead of enhanced.

GO
by colorcarnival

Comment:
Wonderful nostalgia piece. The light in the background gives a ghostly sense of movement, whereas in the foreground creates a path of the car. All items, the board, the car, the house, are all obviously stationary, but the use of light gives a sense of movement to them all. I even love the house/hotel piece, which looks like a faded memory.

Energy vortex
by tunnelvision

Comment:
Interesting piece, my only nitpick is the light looses it's three-dimensionality at the very top- it looks like the vortex bends backwards the 2 loop from the top.

Soccer anyone?
by mbrutus2009

Comment:
I think this would be more interesting, if instead of the goalpost being illuminated, that instead there would be a bouncing light coming from outside the left frame to the goalie, so it looks like the path of a soccer ball being blocked at the last minute.

do not ask what is it
by posthumous

Comment:
If there was a difference of texture (light of grass and then bush/tree) or a play on sharpening focus of an area and defocussing on other areas could help create a more interesting piece. Also, if you have two people in interesting positions, and light them from behind with a stronger light, the shadows on the grass could look like the shadows of monsters creeping in the night.