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| 03/13/2009 01:48:06 AM |
Goalkeeperby orianaComment: Tricky bit of framing on this one. I can't help but get the feeling that you wanted to show the moment captured, but that you actually didn't get the edges on the bottom. Perhaps a clever border might have helped balance this pic a bit different/better (?).
The line from the foot/leg/arm to eyes is effective, and suggests the square crop, but the rest of the content of the pic doesn't quite match.
Also, I'm sure you don't need to be told that it's backfocused, but that pulls my eye's attention to the left. My entry was also backfocused since it was taken on my first day with my cam and the lens I got was faulty. I addressed this by applying a bit of gaussian blur to the areas that were erroneously in focus, then coming back to treat the rest of the image as to sharpening and contrast and such. There is a lot of leeway with the image size on DPC.
Also, the boy has a few very strong dark features in his face. It might be improved to use a tiny, tiny bit of careful dodging to help bring attention to that area.
Overall, there's enough good here that it's easy to see why this was your choice for 'hidden gem'. |
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| 03/13/2009 01:40:57 AM |
Torsos and Treesby JeffryZComment: On my first glance, I actually thought that the trees were part of the art. I'd say that is an indicator of something effective.
I wonder if the fact that the trees all seem 'linked' to the legs that are in the front was part of the decision process for choosing this pic.
The IR treatment is 'so-so'. I'd prefer a stronger contrast in the sky, especially in the top third to make the fronds stand out better. This could have been done in post processing.
I would definitely call this a 'mediocre pic with a little something special'. Seems to fit nicely with the challenge. 6. |
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| 03/13/2009 01:36:24 AM |
End of Dayby CraftyComment: There's something I don't much care for about this picture. I think it might be the narrow field of view. On the other hand, there is also something appealing about it in the 'eye' of the image.
Since this challenge isn't about technicals, I'm weighting the score up for the artistic 'eye. |
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| 03/11/2009 11:02:20 AM |
Heroesby JammurComment: Now you have definitely got something going on here. Have you considered taking a look at using a specific B&W color filter to increase contrast in your sky? I think it would help things a fair bit. |
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| 03/11/2009 10:35:10 AM |
Girl on Swingby supacohenComment: AHHH she's giving me the CRAZY EYE! heh. Maybe I've voted on too many images for the night.
I really like the composition of this and the intriguing yellow BG. The pedestrian in the back isn't distracting, but does add some interest.
I gave this a 6, but as soon as I left for the next pic, I knew I had made a mistake and came back to bump it up a bit. |
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| 03/11/2009 10:31:24 AM |
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| 03/11/2009 10:30:45 AM |
Beauty and Her Shadowby michaelmonnComment: I really like that border. Did you try changing it to a different layer mode? Might have had an interesting effect in luminosity or lighten or multiply, or applied as a combination of more than one. |
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| 03/11/2009 10:28:02 AM |
Storm at seaby BJokerudComment: stunning first impression. Suffers a bit from not being horizon corrected. |
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| 03/11/2009 10:26:56 AM |
Flamboyant Flamingoby KelliComment: That is impressive. A really, really nice pic of a flamingo that is not in the least bit cliche. |
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| 03/11/2009 10:25:04 AM |
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