Round Brilliant Two-Tone Ring
by mocabela

Comment:
This ad is sooo close to being perfect. Great,great comp and i can feel the texture. Yoour choice of lighting is also very good However, I don't get the two-tone and I'd ask for more diamond and setting and less ring. I'd probably ask for a horizontal orientation.

Silver Greek Key Design Bracelet...$129.95
by Cutter

Comment:
I love the tag line and the composition. I'd ask for a little more DOF on the photo and the rule of putting a Company name in it is that it should be obvious who the company is. I don't get that here. I'd request that it were more pronounced. You could make it bigger and change the font. A small stroke would help.

History In The Making
by RedOak

Comment:
Very well done. The reddish rocks add the needed contrast that lets the watch stand out and the photo is incredibly crisp and in focus. I get the impression of a durable watch that is very good looking too. If I were buying the ad I'd request that the text be enlarged a bit, maybe 50% bigger maybe double. Perhaps a different color font. the photo is perfect. Nice, nice job.

The Three C's
by PollyBean

Comment:
Great ad. The message is clear and direct. I like that. The photo isn't what I'd recommend. Lose the shadow. (but that might cost the reflection that I believe could be really cool.) A small stroke on the text would make it stand out more

Untitled
by troylox

Comment:
Great, great ad, Needs more contrast and bigger font (Darker)

...dream come true
by lilnukee

Comment:
A great job. palcement is well centered and the text is simple and to the point. A crisper shot of the ring and this could be a finalist.

Fidelity
by ergo

Comment:
I see an incredible Idea here with the photo, I like the eye in the background. However the text is small and the master card idea is played out. The photo a great start even though I'd use more DOF and lighten it a bit.

640-final.jpg
by ebertdj

Comment:
This is one of the better ones I've seen. Your experience is obvious. What doesn't work for DPC works for me. The starlight adds a great touch. I like what the text says, simple and direct, however I'd recommend looking for another font. this one is hard to read.

Starflower Necklace of Beads
by photom

Comment:
I love the gradient if not the clarity. With a clearer shot there's alot of potential here.

Forever Ice
by Matthew

Comment:
The very blurry water/ice is a distraction to an otherwise great shot. the ring's palcement is great as it allows for text to be well placed also.