| Image |
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| 08/31/2006 11:27:07 PM |
Untitledby zardozComment: A dramatic pose, with nice touches of highlights here and there. The carpet and sheet visible at the bottom and right of the photo are real distractions. |
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| 08/31/2006 11:25:42 PM |
Evening Splashby cislanderComment: I think a tighter crop on the girl would dramatically increase the strength of the composition. The girl has the emotion that drives this photo -- the boy on the right is a distraction. |
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| 08/31/2006 11:24:06 PM |
Dark Assassinby MarkComment: The focus is a shade soft. A tighter crop on the subject would reduce the distraction of that big shadow on the right. |
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| 08/31/2006 11:23:13 PM |
Lakeside Duskby wavelengthComment: I think you've got too much silhouette in this -- its too dark and the overlapping lines are quite busy. |
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| 08/31/2006 11:21:33 PM |
A Little Frenchby carpentsComment: Nice bokeh on the lights, but the dark background is hiding much of the lines of the silhouette. Hiding the table would help preserve the illusion that this is anything other than a model. |
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| 08/31/2006 11:20:33 PM |
A dash of Blueby BluebearComment: A strong composition with the drowned trees receding towards the horizon. Your lighting is your weak spot. Its really flat and grey. Adding some contrast or darkening the image may help that. |
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 08/31/2006 11:19:08 PM |
Claustrophobiaby DjabordjaborComment: Strong lines, and the blown highlights really work for this picture. The bug's position is somewhat odd -- as if its missing limbs. |
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| 08/31/2006 11:17:52 PM |
Longing For West Texas...by 777STANComment: A couple of issues here. One your contrast seems a bit off as there is a "haze" over the whole image. Your blacks aren'te truly black. The other is that the angle of the cowboy hat combined with the frame of the window hides the hat's strong and distinct lines. |
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 08/31/2006 11:15:37 PM |
Bike Rideby gsalComment: I think the mesh fencing really detracts from this image. I'd also like to see some separation between the two riders to simplify and strengthen their outlines. As it is, the whole image is way too busy. |
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| 08/31/2006 11:14:13 PM |
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