The Kiss
by SquishyB

Comment:
Your background is quite distracting. Its unevenly lit and the texture of the wall is too obvious. The figurines are a poor candidate for a silhouette because of all of the reflections from the surface. Emotionally, this has no impact on me as I'm having trouble making any connection with the figurines. Had these been real people, I think the passion would show much more.

Waiting
by astrogeek

Comment:
You need a better focus on the spider -- I can just see hints of hairy legs, but nothing on him is sharp. Also, a bit more contrast and focus might bring out the web better as well. Having done that, I'd crop out some of the negative space above the spider. Its not doing anything for the image. Most of the image should be spider and web.

Red Eye Flight
by AppleFunk

Comment:
Looks like you've got a bit of motion blur either on the bird or your camera or both. I like both the composition and colors. This could've been improved with a faster shutter speed, IMO.

Horizon Silhouette
by mnouwens

Comment:
I think you may have cropped in too closely here. Everything is blurry and pixellated.

Without You
by nsharp

Comment:
Your subject is well lit, but the background needs some work -- I can see the wrinkles in the sheet. You need to step away from it a few feet so it will be out of focus, and the imperfections in the sheet not as obvious.

Three Graces
by Zoomdak

Comment:
I really like the rock/tree combination on the left. I think you would have made a much stronger shot by eliminating the other rocks and including the single rock with the tree and the moon.

Nightfall
by Wade

Comment:
I like the composition, but I don't like what you appear to have done in post-processing. Parts of it look very grainy, others look over-smoothed or blurred.

The Place of the Skull
by philup

Comment:
I really like the concept your going for here. The red really sets the scene well. I think you could improve this by getting closer to and under the crosses. With the threatening red sky I feel like the crosses should be towering over the picture, rather than occupying the corner.

Heading Home
by drj0037

Comment:
Nice colors and composition. The focus seems a touch off as nothing looks sharp.

Watching the Storm
by irishblue

Comment:
I like idea here. I think a slightly lower angle on your model to eliminate some of the tracks in the sand and draw the eye out to the waves would help this.