Whilst Afloat on A Boat
by Pangurban

Comment:
Hello from the critique club....

Hey nice fish... I like the composure. Your crop is nice. The texture of the water and the fish's scales is nice. The lighting, I think, is a bit bright on the fish's underbelly. Some color has been lost. Not a bad shot. Happy shooting.

s w o o s h
by Ja-9

Comment:
Hello from the critique club...

Nice finish. I have been looking at this shot for like 30 min and I'm sorry but I just don't see anything resembling a fish. I did not vote but I probably would have been one of those DNMC voters we all hate. On to the actual picture now. The shot is good for an abstract I do like it even though I think it is a DNMC. In fact, I could see this hanging on the wall. I like the flowing movements and the colors. Nice shot. Happy shooting.

music man
by jgirl57

Comment:
Hello from the critique club...

The 1st thing that jumps out at me is the lighting. It just seems off. I understand that this was at a music festival in a tent. The lighting can be hard to manage. I am sure that had an effect on your score. However, the subject is good and I like how you framed him into the shot using the microphone as "the rule of thirds". Happy shooting...

rule of thirds VI-5
by fngood83

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Hello from the critique club...

This is a good quality b&w. I'm not too crazy about the kids legs being wacked off though.I really like the stopped motion of the water from the water gun. Also your DOF is good and I like the subject matter. Looks like a good time. Happy shooting.

Egg Head
by Penny Lane

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LOL ya egg head...This is funny

a s c e n s i o n
by Ja-9

Comment:
Hello from the critique club....

I like your use of motion blur with this. It also has a very calming / soothing feel. Overall not a bad shot. Happy shooting

Lake Thunderbird
by postoakinversion

Comment:
Hello from the critique club...

1st Id like to say nice shot. I like how the water is very tranquil. You also have a nice sky with stars. However there is a small problem with the lighting that doesn't agree with me. The left bottom there are a couple of rocks that are sort of yellow. They really stick out to me. They should be lighted like the bottom right rocks. I know you were lighting it with an iphone and a long exposure. That sounds difficult to me. Anyway nice shot and it seems to have done ok in the challenge. Happy shooting.

Liquid Diamonds
by Ja-9

Comment:
Hello from the critique club...

Janine very nice image. Great editing. I like the water / dew droplets. Congrats on a top 10 finish. Happy shooting

quiet
by Ja-9

Comment:
Hello from the critique club...

Another very good shot from Janine. Well done. Good execution of this. It does feel very serene. I like the reflections in the water. Also your editing is spot on. Nicely done. Happy shooting.

Sunday Morning, Under the Expressway
by LN13

Comment:
Hello from the critique club...

There is just something about a fisheye lens that I like. It is framed very nicely with the overpass. Also I love the kid in the foreground. That adds a lot to the pic. This works well as a b&w, however, the background is a bit bright. Some detail has been lost there. As far as the rest of the shot there is plenty of detail. Happy shooting.