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| 09/22/2010 07:59:43 AM |
The most comfortable chair - Contentmentby RianBotesComment: It looks like you tried to saturate the colors a bit more while darkening the highlights on her head, which has made the top of her head look strange and noticeably cyan. Her expression is lovely, but I wish you had used a shallow depth of field to blur out some of the texture of the background. |
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| 09/22/2010 07:51:41 AM |
Lost In Her Fantasyby shutterflyComment: I love the dream-like quality and the patch of blue sky that matches her dress, but I wish the light was a little softer (wait for a cloud to pass in front of the sun?) and at a bit of an angle to her to create a little bit of shadow, which adds dimension to the image. |
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| 09/22/2010 07:50:05 AM |
Life as a Teenby SiouxComment: The graffiti works very well with his outfit, but I would have preferred a shallow depth of field to blur out the rest of the background. |
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| 09/22/2010 07:46:18 AM |
rev·e·la·tionby BlampyComment: Unfortunately, "legs spread towards the camera" is not the most attractive pose. The highlight on his clothes are also too blown for my taste. |
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| 09/22/2010 07:45:22 AM |
forgottenby jbrobesonComment: The backlight is perfect. I love the shadow it makes on the floor! The old window frame on one side helps break up the symmetry a bit, which helps the image a lot. The only thing I would change is the main light in front of her. I would move it a lot more to camera left, almost directly to the side of the model to create moody light and some shadows on her face. The model also looks a little uncomfortable. Were there any other outtakes with a stronger or more relaxed expression? |
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| 09/22/2010 07:42:15 AM |
Frankly, I Prefer Sofasby banmornComment: Love it. I half wish there was something on one side of the chair to break up the symmetry a bit. Still, this is a fun image. |
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| 09/22/2010 07:40:53 AM |
The falsity of the four-legged stool of retirement Principleby michelaudetteComment: I like the idea. The light is nice, but you could make it better by using a light behind the subject to his right (image left) to separate him from the background. You could also use curves to brighten the upper range of the image to that your whites (like the paper) are actually white instead of grey. |
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| 09/22/2010 07:38:56 AM |
chair by arkeil11Comment: I can see where you were going with this, but I think it would have worked better with a black chair and a white card bouncing a bit more light on his face. The eye is usually attracted to the brightest part of the image, which, unfortunately in this image, is not the person. |
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| 09/22/2010 07:37:04 AM |
Diva on a red chairby SphinxComment: I wish the light was the tiniest bit softer (maybe wait until a cloud passes in front of the sun?). I love that the chair is much more colorful than the rest of the image, though I might have taken it a step further and desaturated everything but the chair and the subject. Putting the model in a solid color shirt would make this a bit more dreamy by taking away anything that might date the image. |
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| 09/22/2010 07:32:44 AM |
Teller of Tall Talesby RmacComment: How lovely! The face matches the outfit matches the pose matches the chair matches the background! Everything fits together so perfectly! Well done! Great colors too. I'm sure he'll love this image. |
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