Slurp!
by EstimatedEyes

Comment:
There aren't many colors in this photo, but still they are to distracting. I wish this was in black and white.

Gate Keeper
by anthonyczaja

Comment:
I wish she had better shoes, of the kind with long thin heels.

You don't want to see the "Exit" shot
by GueDesigns

Comment:
A clever idea that doesn't work for more than 5 seconds.

Access
by aznym

Comment:
Lovely. I grew up in a place in a period where these things were really a window to the world. At first sight, this is more reaching out, trying to capture something, rather than entering, but in the long run it is entering the world, that big village.

Dance trio
by natalka9

Comment:
Now that the challenge is finished I can say that this is a hell of a good photo. I can feel the dancing here. Still so many things to be improved, but a lovely results (I mean, the photo, not the score).

Annelise
by 777STAN

Comment:
Good luck in future work.

AnneliseIsaacK-Shots063.jpg
by 777STAN

Comment:
A beautiful photo.
A very beautiful face.

Man with bag - man with car keys
by jjbeguin

Comment:

Originally posted by eyeofmymind: Where are the car keys? Its too dark.

They´re on the hand of the man outside, see, the guy out there opening the door of the car, look through the door of the shop.

The title of this photo seemed like a U2 lyric to me.

Kaafa
by aznym

Comment:
After reading your note, I wish you included more on the background, so that I´d get a better understanding of this man´s life. Now I got to like Kaafa, his radio and the wrinkles life wrote on him.

Round Midnight
by riot

Comment:
Compositionally, this photo is great, because the centered composition follows naturally. I don´t like that it isn´t monochrome, a simple play with light, instead having the colors of human skin opposing the white of the music sheet. A small detail, but not such a big deal would be asking your model to remove the ring. All these, small observations from the technical point.

Regarding the story, this photo is confusing to me, because it´s periphery is so smooth and pleasant (lovely hands and music sheet), but then at the center is this big dark noisy O, punching my face. I don´t understand the title either: it might work as Jazz, or whatever, but this photo doesn´t say Round midnight to me, despite the association of the sax´s O with the clock.

Still, a very good photo, which, if black and white, I could see hanging on the walls of some jazz bar.