Alone In The Corner
by asmithphotos

Comment:
Not really an inspired shot. The empty wall on the right does not add anything to the picture. Having a model sitting alone in the corner would convey your idea of desolation better than just a cup. The lighting could be more dramatic.

Barren Barn
by breadfan35

Comment:
A bit dull and uninspired. Could do with more contrasting colors and a more interesting angle.

forlorn in the forest
by dragonlady

Comment:
Nice colors, but this photo could be more interesting if you added some DoF.

Cut, Slowly Falling Apart
by tngrndream

Comment:
This photo could be much more interesting if you took it from a lower angle, and/or if the subkect wasn't centered. It could also use a bit more contrast. The log is sort of going up in the background.

Nature's Carpet
by Xilebo

Comment:
I'm sorry, but this shot isn't very good. You could probably enhance it by bumping the contrast/saturation a bit, but probably more dramatically by adding something of interest in your photo. Right now it lacks depth and a focal point. A few shadows here and there could make it more interesting, but why not put a model in somewhere? You could even pose yourself.

T h e D r o u g h t
by SDW

Comment:
I'm wondering if this wouldn't work better with some muted coloring.

Help
by Ennil

Comment:
Lovely muted colors and very dramatic sky. However, you model looks more like she's havig fun than your obvious intention.

The Derelict Souls
by palmero

Comment:
Brilliant. That little dash of color makes this shot.

Alone
by banmorn

Comment:
Absolutely beautful flower shot, but I can't see any desolace in it. Still, can't give a low score for this.

Miners Past
by ShutterPug

Comment:
Very moody sky. This street is waiting for something bad to happen.