Burst of Yellow
by Mighty_Mouse

Comment:
Focus not crisp.

Delicate
by daboardergirl

Comment:
I think you have lost a lot of detail in the fabric due to over exposure.

It's Pastel Man
by stare_at_the_sun

Comment:
Good idea. I feel it could have been improved by having a tight crop on just his face or by having a solid color background. The dual color background is pulling me away from his face.

A Dog of Soft Color
by jaysonmc

Comment:
A beautiful portrait. Well done

Saruta
by librodo

Comment:
A beautiful shot but I feel it could be improved by having the lower portion of her face more in focus, especially since she has the pastel lipstick on that is so dramatic and different- a crisper focus there would improve this shot.

Flower Girl
by jaxed

Comment:
Beautiful. Finally a photo of a child where the skin hasn't been over processed. There is a lot going on with the flowers but you are still drawn to her eyes. Well done.

Inner light
by MattO

Comment:
A beautiful flower and nice lighting. I believe your photo could have been improved by by having the background all black. There is something in the lower right background which keeps pulling my eye to it. I also think either a wider crop where the petals aren't cut off or a tighter crop would make a more dramatic photo.

Soft and pastel
by marvin

Comment:
I like your idea but I really can't see an area in the photo that is clearly in focus.

Splendid Color Girl
by annah

Comment:
This is a pretty model but a rather plain composition. I think a better pose - especially where her hands weren't cut off would have improved this photo.

Memories
by lkn4truth

Comment:
I like your idea but am distracted by the fact that the girls legs and doll are in focus but her face is not.