i. love. ketchup.
by Tom

Comment:
Slightly off on the 2 end pics, but still a good series. Nice expression!

It's Raining Cats and Dogs
by KristinaG

Comment:
The first 2 pics are great! You lose me on the third. The real umbrella gets lost in the background and loses effect. You should have kept the drawn umbrella with the cats and dogs. IMO

The Young Scientist
by RianBotes

Comment:
There are several entries with a series of progression like this one. I feel that in this situation the lighting should be identical throughout the series. The lighting in the middle pic is brighter and better than the 2 shots on the ends. Also a hair light in the top right pointing down at your subject would give it more shape and hilite his hair. I still like the story

A difficult choice
by bjoern

Comment:
I say go with the third set. A little levels boost would help this set. Good luck

Puppy Love
by karenk

Comment:
Pics are crisp. Borders are a little uneven and the top left pic is a little higher than the main pic. Bottom left pic looks a little funny with his dopey eyes.

Re-Birth
by njsabs

Comment:
Would I be correct in guessing this is Njsabs? Great BW series. Model looks familiar.

Roofus The Red
by liberty

Comment:
Wicked eyes!! Not sure what happened to the camera left side of it's nose in the middle pic. Looks like it was painted? Otherwise a striking series.

So ... you think you can blow the biggest bubble??
by SAScambos

Comment:
Very colorful. Not sure if the f first pic really fits with the other 2. What is the model doing? Or what are we to think she is doing?

He loves me, he loves me not
by Judi

Comment:
Beautiful lighting on your beautiful daughter. At first glance I thought maybe the second and third pics are in the wrong order but I think I like it the way it is. The other way would make it unbalanced. Good Luck

... the bittersweet & unforgiving clarity of age ...
by Bear_Music

Comment:
Robert I like the idea, I would like to see the shirt sharp in each capture and just apply the blur to your face only in the first pic.