4133690754
by bobonacus

Comment:
again nice to give a more intimate feeling move more to the right and have the girl looking up and eyes closed. the guy would be looking down at the girl. you are doing great shoots just look for ways you can bring in different feelings. I would use this shoot u have placed just before the shoot I just described in an album

4132930919
by bobonacus

Comment:
nice shoot, I been looking lately at alot of wedding and portrait how to videos. for this one crop out some of the wall and see if it adds to draw the eye to the couple more. you cant do it now but before you click the picture see if someone needs to remove hair from their face.
To give a different feel to the picture you could have the guy's hand to come up and touch the girls,I dont know if to would be better but recreate the shoot and see if it is