Phil, the Flash, Takes a Breakby
zencowComment by FrankRobinson: Hi Chris - here we are again!
This will probably be a much shorter critique, since there really isn't much to say that hasn't already been said. It is a pleasant shot - but unremarkable. You said that it came from trialling a technique, and that is pretty much what it looks like. That said, from where I'm sitting you
have nailed the fill flash thing.
Technically: It's all good - the focus, the DOF and especially the light. You have managed to get a nicely exposed background while capturing all of the hummingbird detail courtesy of the flash.
Artistically: I think the biggest issue is that tiny subject in that fairly open frame. A busier and more interesting background could bolster a composition like this - setting the subject in its environment, but there just isn't enough there to do this. Another minor point (which I got from a pro wildlife photographer's book) is about the angle of shot. Here you are looking up at the bird, which is the angle most people also have so it doesn't really grab them as being different. It may not be possible, but a horizontal or downward angle might add interest. Equally, apparently we should try and shoot land animals horizontal or upwards... got to be worth a try!
In summary, it is technically spot on and you definitely achieved what you were going for, so I guess now the mission is to park that little bit closer!! Happy hunting.
Frank.
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