Lauren 2
by daztaz

Comment by saintaugust:
nice clean shot, model looks good, i would have liked it better if she wasn't looking right into the camera. but i get why you did it.

there is some yellow from the artificial lighting creeping in... i'm not an expert in lighting, so hopefully someone who is can give you some pointers.

good work

Jeff

'Warning' Strange Man Having Trouble With Umbrella in Road Ahead
by daztaz

Comment by eschelar:
One of the few photos that is undersized that actually looks half-decent in a small size!

The constraint feels very road-sign ish...

'Warning' Strange Man Having Trouble With Umbrella in Road Ahead
by daztaz

Comment by darnok:
This is a very funny shot. It would have fared much better if you had used the full 640 pixels you are allowed to, as it stands it is a little too small.

'Warning' Strange Man Having Trouble With Umbrella in Road Ahead
by daztaz

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Hooray for humor! :) Nice job.

'Warning' Strange Man Having Trouble With Umbrella in Road Ahead
by daztaz

Comment by Brad:
Thanks for the chuckle on this - priceless!!
LOL

Message edited by author 2005-06-19 04:28:34.

Sorry
by daztaz

Comment by tristalisk:
Great Idea and very well shot. I realy enjoy the way you allow the veiwer to read a little peice of the letter. It leaves the veiwer wanting more. I also feel the the bright red envelope works well with the shot. Fits the challenge nicely, tells a stor, and is well exucuted. I feel however that a ring or somthing of the sort would have added a little more to the story. But was not necessry well done.

Sorry
by daztaz

Comment by AltPro:
Nicely done.

Sorry
by daztaz

Comment by garlic:
Good composition but may need a litle more negative space, expecially below

Sorry
by daztaz

Comment by srbrubaker:
I love the colors.

Sorry
by daztaz

Comment by rblanton:
You lost me at John. The cliche ruined a very effective photo. To me it would have been much more effective to have let me think "It's a Dear John" letter rather than spoon feed it to me. Dear Ambrose, Theodore or even Walter would have been better... I would have supplanted John and thanked you for letting me think a bit. Never underate your audience, they will hold you accountable for it.