DPChallenge: A Digital Photography Contest You are not logged in. (log in or register
 
Browse Settings
Currently viewing:
Registered UserManRayfan

Show comments:

Per page:

Order:

Comments:


Comments Received by ManRayfan
Pages:  
Showing 31 - 40 of ~45
Image Comment
Mono Lake Reflections
01/23/2010 01:36:23 AM
Mono Lake Reflections
by ManRayfan

Comment by robm001:
Love the colors but just wish that crop were a bit different to get rid of the tiny rock on the right frame.
Mono Lake Reflections
01/22/2010 11:13:09 PM
Mono Lake Reflections
by ManRayfan

Comment by justine:
That is such a strange place. You've really captured the strange feel with beauty. Wonderful colors and reflections.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Mono Lake Reflections
01/22/2010 06:27:06 PM
Mono Lake Reflections
by ManRayfan

Comment by bmartuch:
I love the stillness of the water. Very nice colors.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Mono Lake Reflections
01/22/2010 10:48:50 AM
Mono Lake Reflections
by ManRayfan

Comment by hesitant:
I'd crop the bottom third so that the foreground rocks become a frame, rather than a distraction, for the main, sunlit rocks. Then crop a third of the right side of what's left to give more depth and balance. It then needs a touch of sharpening. - Just a suggestion - good luck.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Heading into Winter
12/06/2009 02:46:19 PM
Heading into Winter
by ManRayfan

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Perhaps a touch oversaturated, however I think it suits the scene.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Heading into Winter
12/04/2009 12:08:21 AM
Heading into Winter
by ManRayfan

Comment by Dr.Confuser:
Aptly titled. You caught the quality of Fall light very well.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Heading into Winter
12/02/2009 12:55:44 PM
Heading into Winter
by ManRayfan

Comment by Ja-9:
I would love to see these with grapes on the vine...nice capture
Photographer found comment helpful.
Heading into Winter
12/01/2009 08:04:42 PM
Heading into Winter
by ManRayfan

Comment by npasel:
Nice shot but seems a bit over exposed.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Heading into Winter
12/01/2009 02:34:38 PM
Heading into Winter
by ManRayfan

Comment by KarenNfld:
Nice scene and good angle but oversharpened and oversaturated.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Mono Lake Mirror Pool
11/11/2009 07:04:59 PM
Mono Lake Mirror Pool
by ManRayfan

Comment by macrothing:


Critique Club Critique

First Impressions
Good potential, I like the reflection. For me, the biggest issue in this photograph is that your 'mono lake pool' is competing too much against the foreground and the background/distance, which also makes the image on the whole a bit busy.

Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
As is, a more refined crop to showcase the pool better would improve the image, in my opinion. If you get a chance to go back, I'd suggest trying a variation in angles to, at least, eliminate the water behind - or maybe include it more but either way, trying to ensure that the "tufas" (?) stand on their own against either a shallow depth of field if land in the background, or else be able to 'use' the water behind them. This would seemingly mean that a very careful 'clamber' across the rocks at the fore would be required to be able to get a somewhat extreme angle, but you might end up with a photograph that truly showcases what you are trying to show.

Comments, Score & Placement Review
144/403 in a Free Study is a very good placing, especially for your 2nd entry at DPC. A score of 5.90 seems about average that placing. Your average of 6.75 from your commenters, is a little more information for you to couple with their comments.

Summary
Nice lighting and, as mentioned above, just some variation in cropping/composition, plus possibly a perspective correction (water levels, fore & rear, reflections, etc (?)), make this an even better image in my opinion.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Pages:  
Showing 31 - 40 of ~45


Home - Challenges - Community - League - Photos - Cameras - Lenses - Learn - Help - Terms of Use - Privacy - Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 03/12/2025 03:02:09 AM EDT.