DPchallenge-5
by Mariano1127

Comment by glad2badad:
She seems so sad.

DPchallenge-5
by Mariano1127

Comment by streetpigeon:
She seems to be a reluctant bride. It's this tension that animates the image. Her skin appears a bit blotchy, maybe due to the lighting, shadows thrown from the tulle. While interesting, I also find it disturbing.

DPchallenge-5
by Mariano1127

Comment by kiwinick:
Oh Dear she does not look too happy to me

DPchallenge-5
by Mariano1127

Comment by bjoern:
I find the net lace somewhat distracting, a bit too bright relative to her face. I think her somewhat angry mood would come across better without the draped fabric.

My Nightmare
by Mariano1127

Comment by sidpixel:
Hello from the critique club

An appealing image that meets the challenge well

Hello Mariano and welcome to DPC with your maiden entry, and what a maidenâ€Â¦! I like the costume and her make up, especially the fangs! Technically is not bad at all but I do have a couple of things to say. The lighting is good but she is too close to the background, you want it uniformly black and sufficiently soft focused to get rid of all the creases. Whilst camera shake is not evident I would suggest 1/60s as a minimum speed if it was hand held but it is acceptable if you used a tripod. Anyway, great start Mariano we look forward to more from youâ€Â¦

My Nightmare
by Mariano1127

Comment by blindjustice:
i like the leather. and the up-hair is terrific.