Places
by claudiadf

Comment by jas0420:
Very nice setting. Think I would have liked it better if the lamp and fence had been cropped out though. That or maybe show all of the fence...

Places
by claudiadf

Comment by JPR:
great sky and silhouettes.

can´t believe
by claudiadf

Comment by JC_Homola:
Greetings from the critique club

I think this is a good concept.

A number of the things I see to comment on have been covered in the during the challenge comments.

Blur, shadows, fingers, all don't quite work.

I do like the composition in the frame.

Possible shooting from a greater distance to allow for more light fill below the eyes and better focus then cropping would have made for a better image.

Diffused fill flash or other diffused light from below to smooth out the shadows.

Of course you could go the other way entirely and strictly limit the light to create sharper shadows which could be interesting.

I can see there is a lot of good detail there.

I hope this helps.
JC

rising rings
by claudiadf

Comment by Olyuzi:
The photo appears to be of onion rings, and while I like the concept and treatment, I find it to be too obscure and abstract to think in terms of smell. Also, the hightlight is way too bright and distracting.

rising rings
by claudiadf

Comment by mclaren_choo:
Now what could this be? I have no idea.

rising rings
by claudiadf

Comment by cmangis:
Very cool! A creative way to shoot an onion; it's almost scary how close I feel to it. :)

can´t believe
by claudiadf

Comment by Neil:
That's a funny look! (not sure its surprise!). Major issue here is focus and ligting.

rising rings
by claudiadf

Comment by ButterflySis:
I'm not sure what this is. Your title isn't helping me much here... After looking at this many, many times I'm thinking the rings may be onions...? Please email me with more information and I'll adjust your score accordingly.

rising rings
by claudiadf

Comment by unikorn:
woah, what is that? im lost....

rising rings
by claudiadf

Comment by fisheye:
Took me awhile to figure out I was seeing onion rings...so it didn't readily suggest a smell to me. Creative shot though.