Oops...
by mrchhas

Comment by DiscoVader:
Took me a minute to recognize the ice cream cone. I like the framing and focus. For this shot, though, I wish the cone was in focus -- or at least a more obvious focal point. Though now that I have said that and looked at the picture again, I really like that both the line on the road and the model's eyes intersect at the cone. The line on the road camouflage the cone too much. Maybe if it had a bright red cherry on top -- or was a brighter colored flavor it would pop out more. Meanwhile, I don't think this shot portrays much sadness. Maybe it would feel more sad to me in a minute or two when the model examines the damage or puts it in the trash.

Oops...
by mrchhas

Comment by FibreOptix:
Not sure what's going on here.... oh that blur is ice cream. She dropped it... oh I see. Higher shutter speed would have made it the ice cream focused and apart of the story. But mabey your were going for motion. But like I said when I first looked at it I thought the cone was in the distance and not apart of the subject. This is the longest comment I have ever left. Wow.

Time for Bed
by mrchhas

Comment by hernan43:
Not enough color in this one.

Breakfast in Italy
by mrchhas

Comment by mrchhas:
Thanks for the helpful comments, I'm just starting out in photography and it's great to have such clear feedback!

Breakfast in Italy
by mrchhas

Comment by expatdawn:
I can almost smell the coffee brewing. The coffee mug on the right isn't needed and takes focus away from the main subject.

Breakfast in Italy
by mrchhas

Comment by jamesgoss:
Lovely tones, grains and texture. I find the composition to be a bit haphazard, the framing seems a bit close, and the slight angle of the filter bothers me. Conceptually, it seems simple, especially with only 3 elements (and a weird handle) in the frame. 6

Breakfast in Italy
by mrchhas

Comment by gattamarta:
Welll done, even if I think that many entries have too a shallow dof, here it works well, and together with a good composition it makes a very nice photo. An extra point because it is a Bialetti (kidding!)