unsystematic dreamscape
by xburnerx

Comment by lockjawdavis:
The big, pink border really undermines a rather good shot here.

unsystematic dreamscape
by xburnerx

Comment by L1:
IMHO, I would have cropped out the dark area on the left entirely. The area in the center is distracting.

unsystematic dreamscape
by xburnerx

Comment by labuds:
Weird post-processing, maybe?

walkway to harmony
by xburnerx

Comment by Mona:
Nice and very good.

forever trapped
by xburnerx

Comment by David.C:
With a view like that it would be easy to become trapped. Good choice on coloring.

forever trapped
by xburnerx

Comment by sp00f:
I wouldn't mind being trapped there. Looks like as good a place as any.

walkway to harmony
by xburnerx

Comment by melismatica:
The placement of the two fenceposts frames that tiny railing, giving it far more prominence then it deserves. The huge expanse of concrete in the foreground does nothing considering it takes up a third of the frame. Moving in closer would have eliminated that and possibly eliminated the railing as well leaving the fence posts to act as a framing device for the ocean which should then be focused much better to allow for more eyepopping color and detail. Judging by your title you meant to include the concrete walkway and the railing but a concept does not automatically translate into a pleasing composition.

waiting in the midst
by xburnerx

Comment by 0055:
Sweet job on the high placing in the contest, once again sorry I can't vote. Still thought this shot is stellar, damn stellar

waiting in the midst
by xburnerx

Comment by mirdonamy:
Great shot! Where was this taken? It can't be Las Vegas!!!

Message edited by author 2004-04-28 10:59:11.

walkway to harmony
by xburnerx

Comment by theodor38:
this could have been a 9 image but it seems washed out and out of contrast.. very good otherwise (7)