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| 01/30/2004 09:20:55 PM |
Bathed in Black Lightby sfaliceComment by faidoi: Great depth of field. Focusing on the subjects are very good. Interesting colors on them. Beautiful shapes and shadows are formed by the lighting. They almost look like shrimp."10" |
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| 01/30/2004 05:41:56 AM |
Elephant Seal greets her newborn pupby sfaliceComment by e301: Critique Club
Hi Alice
Good score - pity that the standard was so high for that challenge, else you'd have placed so much better.
For me there was something not quite satisfying about this shot - I mean that it didn't quite get me as I though it might have been able to. I know it's a tricky shot to get, but I don't think that should sway opinions of it. I think I felt that the framing of the shot was not good: I'd rather have seen a touch more location, perhaps. Also I wonder about your placement of the seals' heads in frame, and relative to the bodies: maybe showing more of the mother would enable you to contrast the relative sizes of the two and to put the real subject (that moment of contact) into a stronger place compositionally. I can imagine then the lines of the bodies forming a happier graphic element to the image. Just thoughts and imaginings, or course.
More purely technically, of course, there is nothing to criticise. And of course, its absolutely fitting for the challenge: I just feel that you slightly missed the 'art' element that NG seems to like in its nature shots.
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