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by idnic

Comment by rlinn3:
Nicely exposed and good composition. Looks just a little sterile to me.6.

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Comment by kawhona:
Well staged and a good idea. For studio shots I tend to be very critical of lighting since you control it. In this case I think there is not enough contrast and use of highlighting. The focus seems to be soft on the tip of the middle pen also.

Red White & Blue
by idnic

Comment by chesire:
Base: 5
Tech: +2
Subj:+1
Chln:

Total: 8

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Comment by ninja:
Good composing! Great bn!

Red White & Blue
by idnic

Comment by BrianR:
For thought....10 for image...10 for colour....10 Average.......10
and I not an American

Red White & Blue
by idnic

Comment by kawhona:
Excellent choice and use of color. I think the framing is too prominent and that it detracts from the shot ... well done.

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Comment by Grigolly:
I don't like this photo... pens are very unusually put. Photo is too flat. On the other hand, techniqally, it's done on 10! Good job, but not the best composition.. my mark is 7:)

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Comment by buzzmom:
the idea is good.it would have been great having obtained a quill instead of cartridge pens . this only takes away from the idea of obsolete. especially using morethan one.

Our Fathers
by idnic

Comment by RolandB:
Wrong kind of leading line :) But what a great picture.

Our Fathers
by idnic

Comment by Pedro:
technically a nice photo. sharp detail and rich colours. Conceptually it doesn't grab me too hard, but i'm sure would appeal to Americans more because of the subject. I certainly see the figurative leading lines, not so sure about the literal ones. I think the idea of the challenge was more the literal, but I can accept both :)

great props as well.