curves, lines and contrast
by olya

Comment by Gotcha:
I love this shot, it is one of my top 3 for this challenge. I personally do not like the feather. I have a bird, so most feathers in my office are un-welcome.

curves, lines and contrast
by olya

Comment by crisa58:
I really like the way the deep lines work in the layout of the photo. The lighting is strong, but not overpowering, but the feather was a stroke of genius. I assume you placed it? It's texture is such a contrast, the juxtaposition so sublime. Truly a marvelous shot. 10 crisa58

curves, lines and contrast
by olya

Comment by karmat:
I think the feather adds a nice touch, but in my opinion, it needs to be to the left, just a touch to feel a little more balanced. karmat

curves, lines and contrast
by olya

Comment by langdon:
nice composure.

curves, lines and contrast
by olya

Comment by autool:

Composition6
Originality7
Technical Aspects5
Meets Challenge8
Total Score7

For those that are just learning, like me.

Composition: Scoring in this area is based on basic composition of a picture and includes the rule of thirds, balance, cropping, and curved and diagonal lines. Subject matter that does not lend itself to the picture or otherwise unwanted is also considered here.

Originality: Scoring in this area is based on pictures or concepts that I have seen, as well as how much effort you have invested in the picture. Usually a little something that sets it aside from a snapshot. Does it make me want to come back for another look? You know things like that.

Technical Aspects: Focus, exposure, lighting, and other special effects (done by the camera), and post processing are all considered in this category.

Meets Challenge: This is based on my interpretation of if you, have/have not, met the challenge. This is fairly simple but quite important for this site.

There are many sites that can give you assistance in achieving better skills in photography, but I think the best way to learn is to take pictures and show them to other people. Believe me when it is a good one you will know it.

Good luck!

Autool

curves, lines and contrast
by olya

Comment by jgoings:
Great composition and subjects!

curves, lines and contrast
by olya

Comment by complex:
Composition and texture is excellent, but I think the colors are a bit dull...

curves, lines and contrast
by olya

Comment by UberFish:
Needs to be shaper, use a smaller aperture.

curves, lines and contrast
by olya

Comment by mykoleary:
I like the contrast of the feather on the third line, nice addition. Good example of making a shot vs. taking a shot.

curves, lines and contrast
by olya

Comment by Alemmsan:
Good idea... a little bit closer would work