Gas Stop
by sixgunwoody

Comment by wewillexplore:
Greetings from the Critique Club,

Hiya Derek. Nice to 'meet' ya! :)

I think less is more here. I would like to see less of this photo to like it more. I think the roof of the station and the bottom of the photo with the car shadow are both unnecessary. I would make a horizontal crop of this.

The silhouette isn't dark enough for my tastes. I prefer a black or nearly black shape to silhouettes. I also think the light is just a bit too harsh here. The lonnnnnnnnnng shadows are a touch much for me.

This is a pretty good pic that probly finished lower than it should have. Imagine this at a different time of day or horizontally cropped, however.

Good luck and happy shooting,
Mav

Phallic Proportions
by sixgunwoody

Comment by Mona:
Lol, very funny and good symbolism.

Historic Grand Junction
by sixgunwoody

Comment by frumoaznicul:
Interesting composition verry good colors and the sky gives it a little more power.

Phallic Proportions
by sixgunwoody

Comment by jodiecoston:
The high contrast works well in this image, making it very artistic. 8

Historic Grand Junction
by sixgunwoody

Comment by f-32:
colors seem a little funky - even for Grand Junction.

Phallic Proportions
by sixgunwoody

Comment by soccerdad:
This is much too abstract for me to enjoy.

Phallic Proportions
by sixgunwoody

Comment by lolly_gagger:
dumb.

-5

Historic Grand Junction
by sixgunwoody

Comment by arnit:
Very dramatic. The blue vs the orange works well. Like it!

Historic Grand Junction
by sixgunwoody

Comment by vtruan:
What no Colorado River shot!!!

Historic Grand Junction
by sixgunwoody

Comment by breckinshire:
great subdued colors - well done! I love love love this shot