Thoughts of a child
by Ennil

Comment by pwm6:
This really catches the surrealist idea.

Thoughts of a child
by Ennil

Comment by jfinch:
Good attempt. A bit washed out for my liking.

Thoughts of a child
by Ennil

Comment by whagerbaumer:
The face is very well done, but the overall picture shows demonstrates a number of areas for development of photographic technique. The shadow of the right shoulder can be lessened by moving the model away from the wall. The shadow on the lower part of the face mask is a lighting problem as are the shadows in the upper right and the glare in the lower right. You can quickly master these technique lighting issues. A 4.

Thoughts of a child
by Ennil

Comment by macronaut:
Ya, putting something in front of your face has been done way too much.

A little rainy for this white day
by Ennil

Comment by deli:
nice idea, but a little TOO washed out in places. would be good to see a little more detail on the umbrella

A little rainy for this white day
by Ennil

Comment by ayobami:
cute...

A little rainy for this white day
by Ennil

Comment by nfessel:
Great composition. The use of the umbrella lends an air of mystery to the photo. The only problem I have with this image is that some highlights are blown out. You get a 9 from me.

A little rainy for this white day
by Ennil

Comment by EaThis:
the couch is a bit washed out, but the lovely skin tone accomplished more than makes up for it. Although not perfect, it is great. 8

A little rainy for this white day
by Ennil

Comment by animes2k:
I like the concept behind this shot, but feel like there are a few more steps that would have really helped it out. The composition works pretty well and the midtones are nicely exposed. The couch (especially on the left) is somewhat distracting (as is the smudge on the wall), as is the interplay of the model's legs with each other and the umbrella point. The blown-out sole of the right foot leaves it lacking definition. Finally, the strap on the umbrella could have been left out of the image if only it were rotated 90 degrees. Overall not a bad shot, but many small details add up. Keep at it.

A little rainy for this white day
by Ennil

Comment by kiwinick:
Great Idea but it is way over lit ive my laptop puhed right back to get s dekko at this image., how did you light this,? the best type of light fot this style is soft and full. bouncing the light off white ceiling and using a light diffusion filter would hsve worked wonders.