"Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day"
by theanton

Comment by mamabear5612:
good ideal ..subject looks a little stiff , to possed .. light glar on the wall is a little distracting , sharper focus may help

"Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day"
by theanton

Comment by Brooklynsbridge:
Could be more in focus and less orange on the left side of the picture. Needs to be brightned up. But yes a very bad habit. And the white square to the left of his head is distracting along and the metal piece.

"Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day"
by theanton

Comment by Ambo:
doesn't work for me...to much shadow behind model, and lighting need to re arranged...IMO

"Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day"
by theanton

Comment by mandyp:
Lighting is very flat in this.

"Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day"
by theanton

Comment by Falc:
Nice title.

Shame about the flash shadow - need to use a fill in or reflector to remove that.

"Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day"
by theanton

Comment by thunderbug:
shouldnt have done this on a white background with that angle. I had to search for what the purpose of the picture is... cant see the cigarette or the smoke...

"Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day"
by theanton

Comment by Count:
Cool idea for a photo. Needs work though, pose, lighting, sharpness could use some tweaking. Small changes could make this photo jump right out at you...

"Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day"
by theanton

Comment by carlos:
oh by the way, which one's pink?

"Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day"
by theanton

Comment by Nelzie:
Bad use of a smoking person. It almost seems like something that would be in a cigarette advertisement, especially with that title. I am sorry, but this is bad form and goes against the rules, escpeially with all the talk on the forums leading up to this challenge due date.

Other then that, there is a flash shadow that could have not been in the shot with additional lighting. The background is rather dry and uninteresting.

"Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day"
by theanton

Comment by srikant:
shadow on wall because of flash is annoying. The speaker on wall (I guess) does not add much value to the picture. You could have captured some smoke in picture by reducing light.