Train Tracks
by Loki

Comment by owen:
The tracks are good as leading lines and your subject is very good. I think I would have preferred she was back further so the tracks led the eye to her. The red is a good touch too.

Train Tracks
by Loki

Comment by nborton:
a little less busy background would help bring out the model.

Train Tracks
by Loki

Comment by chele:
this would have worked better if she was standing further away, and the lines of the tracks were actually leading the eye to her.

Train Tracks
by Loki

Comment by Qiki:
IMO your model needed to be further along the tracks. That way the lines would have led to her. As it is, she breaks the leading lines.

Ruthie1
by Loki

Comment by Jutilda:
I like the monochromatic theme with all of the neutral tones. Nice lighting and expressive face.

"a light, pale tint of color".
by Loki

Comment by jerowe:
Hello from the Critique club, my name is Jon Rowe, and i will be looking at your image this evening :)

this is a great image, and i think the skintone and the background work well together to fit the challenge. i honestly can't think of anything to improve this picture. gotta love that 50mm 1.8, huh? very sharp/fast lens. only thing that grabs my attention is the pose, maybe having her right arm up as well, for it looks somewhat uncomfortable and unnatural, but that's nitpicking, because i have to right? :) this is an incredible picture. great job :)

good luck on your future challenges :)
-jon ed rowe

Curving Intersections
by Loki

Comment by Retroesque:
I really like this photo - I have a green bias - GRIN! I really like the way the white collar breaks the photo into thirds

Renaissance1
by Loki

Comment by emorgan49:
the love triangle is perfect - its that slight sideways glance of the mans that makes this picture what it is!

Renaissance4
by Loki

Comment by theSaj:
Nice capture, good accentuation of the curviness of her form. Want just a little more photo to the right of the elbow. I think this shot could benefit from some additional saturation. The colored scarf around her waist would greatly benefit.

Tona2
by Loki

Comment by sjdanke1982:
i like how you brought out the eyes. that always cool