Diamonds are Forever
by slingshot

Comment by Jewellian:
Nice idea, but maybe focus a bit more on the ring itself, possibly by cropping the right side down a bit.

Diamonds are Forever
by slingshot

Comment by Artan:
Excellent Idea, and composition, my concern is that the light relected off the ring makes it look a little out of focus...

Diamonds are Forever
by slingshot

Comment by Steveinnz:
Too much rose not enough of what you are selling

Diamonds are Forever
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Comment by graphicfunk:
Nothing like a rose but when you do employ one you must give top billing to the ring. Here what we see is a hint od a lively ring but how lovely is not very clear. The composition is very good. Bumping up.

Diamonds are Forever
by slingshot

Comment by sofap:
the ring is soft and too small for an ad shot

Diamonds are Forever
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Comment by mycelium:
some things to think about-
1. seems like "Will you marry me?" should have been enclosed in quotation marks.
2. the next line is "Say it with flowers," but there's only one flower...
3. if we're supposed to say it with flowers, what is the ring doing there?
4. if this is a jewelry advertisement, why should we say it with flowers?

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Diamonds are Forever
by slingshot

Comment by tazza:
Good idea, but the strong shadow is distracting. Also the ring appears slightly out of focus

Diamonds are Forever
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Comment by SnapperL:
The light that was used is producing a bad shadow that distracts from the object of the picture. I wish the ring had been a bit clearer also. 6

Diamonds are Forever
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Comment by Nuno:
Verry well thought! That's why the moust important instrument of work is criativity and imagination, not your camera. A 10

Diamonds are Forever
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Comment by md8speed:
It looks like the flower is sharp, but the ring looks a little soft to me