Mother Nature's Sonby
k4rpComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
What a powerful image ... it is more like a painting than a photo to me.
Composition:
I think that this may be an area which could be improved ... by having hte horizon line dead in the centre the eye kind of stops there and gets a little stuck ... there are so many different lines in the picture that none of them act as a leading line taking the eye to a point of interest. Although I did found the rocks in themselves with the water an half the amount of sky may meet the rule of thirds and give a strong leading line ... I am not sure but that may work.
Subject:
Through the title it meets the challenge, I don't know the song ... but going by what is happening in the picture you have choosen a great angle for it.
Technical (Colour and light):
As I mentioned it looks painted i am not sure what processing steps you have taken to achieve this look as their are no photographers comments on this ...
The picture is sharp with a good use of aperture to achieve a very nie depth of field.
The water is sharp and good totally stop motion I can see the spray off the rocks which is great.
To grow its vote?:
Try a different crop ... I am not sure how much DNMC votes you got .. but it seems there may be one or two from the comments ...
Summary:
I like the way you think .. and I think this is a lovely shot .. keep it up.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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