colorism 2by
FyzarlComment by funnylooks: Hello from the Critique Club!
Firstly, congrats on the top ten finish! I love the colours and the shine of this picture.
I really love the composition, and the border definetly adds to the vibrancy of the photo. One possible suggestion (and I'm not quite sure if it'd add to the photo or not), cropping the photo at the bottom so it's all green - cutting out the bit of white down there. I get the impression that it'd make the pic look a bit more grounded...
The DOF is great, though I did notice that the top left, the upper green glass, is the only part that seems to be a bit out of focus.
One other detail is that whatever you used as white underneath seems to have little dust specks that show up. With a picture this clear, i think it'd be nice to have a purer white.
I love the play of light in each of the coloured shadows. In the green it seems to come from a bit of a different angle, which seems a bit odd because the red and the blue are very much the same.
All together, I'd say this is a beautiful picture though. And once again, congrats on the top 10 finish!
--Mariana
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