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by Travis99

Comment by MadMan2k:
I think it'd be nicer with a little wider angle or more of an up/down perspective for the shot.

Also, her cheeks and lip seem to have a purple-ish hue to them, but the rest of the pic is desaturated - what if you just saturated the eyes?

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Comment by MadMan2k:
This one is my favorite of the set, the tones are really good (and the composition - even though the hat is as big as the kid!)

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by Travis99

Comment by cpanaioti:
This is priceless. Might be just a tad bit hot on the upper part of the hat.

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by Travis99

Comment by cpanaioti:
Good expression and angle of the head though the crop feels a bit too tight on the bottom.

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Comment by Jutilda:
THIS IS WONDERFUL!!!!! Great use of sepia filter and props. Darling!!!

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Comment by jenesis:
Very cute expression you captured and cute costume. The background is nice although I think this outfit calls for some sort of outdoor scene. Also, I agree that the light could be a little more evenly dispersed on the child eliminating some of the shadows on the side of the face. I like the treatment you chose. Overall, very cute photo. :-)

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Comment by mandyturner:
I personally feel that this shot is technically perfect! The only thing that I could make a suggestion for would be that if you are going to go above the bang area for a crop, you should include the entire crown of the head. I would have left a little space above her head or I would have cropped the photo a little below where the bangs grow out of her head. Just a little rule I go by, doesn't mean that I am right. She does look a little sad. Maybe if she was looking straight ahead and not up a little, her expression would be a little different. Very nice photos Travis!!!

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Comment by DelRioPhoto:
Wow, what a cutie. She reminds me of a young Britney Murphy in this picture. Her hand appears to be a little out of focus, but that's not the end of the world. I think I would like to see the top of her head in this picture and maybe a different colored backdrop. Well, the backdrop sort of fits this picture. Maybe it's a little too close to her skin tone. Anyway, you're doing great. Keep up these quality shots.

-Jeremy

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Comment by mandyturner:
I really like the crop. Her hair is perfect for this! I like how her hair fills up the frame almost completely. Focus again...spot on! Very nice photograph, but the contrast seems a little flat. That may have been your intent, so ignore that if you want. Her face just seems a little too dark to me.

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Comment by DelRioPhoto:
Well, this is pretty good too! I can't quite decide if I like the cropped look. I think i'd be ok with the top of her head cropped off, but the chin missing is tough for me. Nonetheless, great lighting again and nice shot.

-Jeremy