~Mirage~
by tmilob

Comment by strags:
Unusual.

~Ribbons in the Wind~
by tmilob

Comment by mycelium:
I think this might actually have worked better with a high shutter speed. The curling of the ribbons would probably have made it clear that they were being blown. Here there is nothing well enough in focus to make a compelling focal point for the picture. Still... it's way better than the zillions of flag photos in this challenge... :)

~Ribbons in the Wind~
by tmilob

Comment by aznym:

~Ribbons in the Wind~
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Comment by vontom:
Composition: 5, Technical: 5, Appeal: 5, Challenge: 5, Overall Calculated Average Score: 5

~817~
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Comment by graphicfunk:
Returning for comments:
A pleasant composition but the viewers will always crave a deeper dof. These are like the shots done using f32 with adequate distance to grab it all. However, the placement, design and comp are great and bumping up accordingly.

~Mirage~
by tmilob

Comment by kremkex:
I like this one. There is a feeling of surrealism to it and reading the word "broken" from the bottom up only adds to it. I only wish there was something in the upper corners to make it more balanced. If you don't have any melting clocks handy, then perhaphs a goldfish to the left and a cabbage to the right?

~Mirage~
by tmilob

Comment by docpjv:
unhelpful comments removed

Message edited by author 2005-10-05 06:34:54.

~Mirage~
by tmilob

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Composition: 6, Technical: 6, Appeal: 5, Challenge: 3, Overall Score: 4 (weighted)

~817~
by tmilob

Comment by Ranj:
lighting works against the compostion

~Mirage~
by tmilob

Comment by ccasey:
I think this shot needed more lighting and sharper focus. Great idea!