Their Big Finish
by rayg544

Comment by Elaine:
Good lighting. I wish their feet weren't cut off. Not sure what this has to do with match.

Miss Amy - Photographer...Friend
by rayg544

Comment by fotomann_forever:
Want my honest opinion?

Love it well done :-) Nice tonal qualities. Interesting person (and pretty I might add).Good control of natural lighting.

This might sound kinda corny, but I do believe she is on the wrong side of the tracks. Compositionally with the tilt of her head and angle of her body I think having the tacks to the right side of the frame would have been more interesting.

Miss Amy - Photographer...Friend
by rayg544

Comment by foxinsox47:
The background just doesn't work. The tracks coming out of her shoulder are wrong. On the other hand, nice, crisp portrait contrasting with blurred background. Almost...

Miss Amy - Photographer...Friend
by rayg544

Comment by Thai:
good focus

Miss Amy - Photographer...Friend
by rayg544

Comment by Greetmir:
Nice photo. Friendly. I keep wanting to go down the tracks and see what is around the bend, though. Maybe a tad less DOF would have avoided that distraction and make your model pop out more? - 6

Miss Amy - Photographer...Friend
by rayg544

Comment by 99Percent:
slightly too smoothed, nice backlight, appealing smile and face, background too distracting (maybe greater DoF next time?), has overall potential.

Miss Amy - Photographer...Friend
by rayg544

Comment by slgardner:
The curves on this photo were very well done - Good lights and darks. Nice expression.

Miss Amy - Photographer...Friend
by rayg544

Comment by kanaj:
It looks to me like a higher crop on the bottom would have made this a more flattering portrait of the subject, without losing the nice effect of those railroad tracks in the background. I love the lighting, though.

Miss Amy - Photographer...Friend
by rayg544

Comment by amster:
I believe I recognize this particular train track. Maybe the model should have turned more toward the track. Good dof.

Nashville Dancers
by rayg544

Comment by BakerBug:
Seems like the horizon is not quite level.