Before My Revenge
by downtherabbithole

Comment by bassbone:
I don't understand the title but I do like the shot of the three young men

Before My Revenge
by downtherabbithole

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
Looks like it would be a good picture for a boy band. Although I would have touched up the rough area's of the faces some.

Before My Revenge
by downtherabbithole

Comment by Melethia:
Very creatively done group shot - maybe a tad too much whitening of the eyes but it does make them pop nicely! I really like the composition.

Before My Revenge
by downtherabbithole

Comment by BrianR:
good emotion, lacks power...

the sky spells war
by downtherabbithole

Comment by violinist123:
Take it these are band shots and the look is intentional. Given that, I can get into them when otherwise I wouldn't. Still, I think they'd look even better with some stronger contrat. They look a bit grayed out.

baby blues
by downtherabbithole

Comment by sfalice:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Oh, what a lovely image! Yet you scored so very low.

This is the most clear-cut example of a subtle photograph our hasty voters found DNMC that I've seen yet. Of course it met the Challenge, but our hasty voters didn't take the time to find the blue eyes of the model.

You did a beautiful job of photographing this model and you can certainly feel good about that. You just didn't hit our voters between the eyes. (ooops, sorry about the pun)

I can only say "better luck next time" and keep up the very good work.

Before My Revenge
by downtherabbithole

Comment by abranton:
I think the frame takes away from the photo some. I am not sure how the title relates to the picture??

Before My Revenge
by downtherabbithole

Comment by Judi:
Excellent composition and framing. An Album Cover in the making.

Before My Revenge
by downtherabbithole

Comment by fotomann_forever:
Hey, look, studs :-)

Before My Revenge
by downtherabbithole

Comment by taterbug:
Is this for a band, like an album cover or promo shot? That's definitely what it looks like, and well done too! Very nice lighting and a dynamic composition. Great job :-)