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by efren

Comment by howzitboy:
something funky about her face like its distorted or blurred. it would be a good shot if u could have fixed it. and have her hands relaxed or something cuz one looks odd.
the dress is a bit blown out cuz shooting white dresses are tuff!

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by efren

Comment by BrianR:
Very different for a study photo, but effective...6

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by efren

Comment by neophyte:
A bit over sharpened but the colors are nice and vivid.

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Comment by lovethelight:
I think this looks oversharpened. The bit of cloud on the top left doesn't seem to fit in it would be good to either includ more of the cloud or maybe clone it out

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by efren

Comment by noraneko:
Although I like the sullen / almost defiant expression, it is difficult for me to learn more as my eyes wander around this photo. First, the lighting is harsh and direct, so her face looks a little flattened and cold. Second there's no sense of context I can glean - like is she wearing a uniform? Religious jewelry? What is her setting? Has she been abused? I find myself wantint a little more information from the artist before I'm willing to be drawn in. With that hair, her strong feautures and icy gazy, she could tell a whole story with just one glance - but that glance as to occur in a meaningful setting for teh viewer to be able to relate to her situation.

Orange at Dusk
by efren

Comment by Bud:
Nice framing - I like the lighting.

Orange at Dusk
by efren

Comment by lovethelight:
This probably could have been cropped alot more because all of the space on the left that is dark and out of focus doesn't really add in my opinion, great lighting on the right though

Orange at Dusk
by efren

Comment by bvlindalou:
great light

Orange at Dusk
by efren

Comment by beam:
An orange is more of a sphere than a circle. Nicely lit image though. Windmill is a little distracting.

Autumn Abstract
by efren

Comment by posthumous:
this does have a nice abstract quality to it. 7