Abandoned
by rmtm333

Comment by Skip:
Composition: 5, fairly dead on
Technical: 6, while nothing in the shot is out of place, it also doesn't look like it challenged you too much from a technical standpoint
Appeal: 6, i have mixed feelings about the colors. i don't think the desat is particularly effective here. it's not really grabbing me.
Challenge: 8, while the image has broken windows in it, the way you have treated tends to highlight the stonework as the primary subject. as is, the broken glass is competing (and in my opinion, losing) to the wall.
Overall Calculated Average Score: 6, the one thing that makes this above average for me is the textures that you've captured. good luck!

Hair
by rmtm333

Comment by maxj:
its a good shot, however, some more expression from the girl could give the shot more feeling.

Hair
by rmtm333

Comment by purna:
I want to see th other half! just kidding. :)

Hair
by rmtm333

Comment by vince31874:
Good crop.

Hair
by rmtm333

Comment by DDYJR:
I THOUGHT THE WAY THE AUTHOR FRAMED HIS SUBJECT GAVE THE PHOTO IMPACT. B/W ALSO DOES THE IMAGE JUSTICE. NICE JOB!

Hair
by rmtm333

Comment by Bran-O-Rama:
Excellent! Wish the image wasn't cropped so tightly on the left and the top. Would've been great to see this at full 640px.

Abandoned
by rmtm333

Comment by alternarule:
would be better if the window was fully cnetered, nice color in the rocks

Hair
by rmtm333

Comment by vontom:
Composition: 7, Technical: 7, Appeal: 6, Challenge: 7, Overall Calculated Average Score: 7

Hair
by rmtm333

Comment by Karalew:
Excellent! I like the cropping.

Hair
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Comment by nordic:
very well executed, my fav so far - 10