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Comment by docpjv:
brilliant brilliant brilliant! how come i missed these? you go to my list of favorite photographers so i can keep an eye on your work!

In The Mist
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Comment by docpjv:
i think this is the kind of pic you can print and hang in your house, something to be proud of. good job!

Joy
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Comment by docpjv:
amazing pic, really beautiful. you have real talent!

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Comment by Joey Lawrence:
best of the series

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Comment by christie3:
now i really like this shot, but i'm not sure about the lighting on your face thang...on one hand, i think the darkness works, because it's more moody and all that jazz, but then...i think on the other hand, a bit more would be nice, but it might not give the same feeling as the darker one does.
heh, so i am absolutely no help at all, sorry. : ) i do like it how it is, i'm just not sure if a teeny bit more light would hurt it or help it...

at the game
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Comment by Matthew:
Hello from the Critique Club!

This is an interesting image, and I like the colour palette that you have used: the bright reds and muted, dark tones work well together. Grain has been added well. Composition is fine, but you might be picked up on a tilted horizon and the floodlights on the RHS add little, and are a little close to the RHS to add proper balance.

Unfortunately my monitor shows up a little dark, but the subject's face is very heavily in shadow. This focusses attention on the rest of the subject, which may be your intention, but I am not sure why? There is maybe not enough of a "story" told by the image to hold attention for long, and it is not quite interesting enough to stand up as a fascinating image in its own right. While I think that you have applied the grain effect very well, I don't know why this image needs this treatment.

I think that as part of a sequence, ir with an explanation, this image could be much more powerful, but does not work so well by itself. Good technical skills though!

Good luck with the next challenge!

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Comment by jeaglej:
this is one of my favorites. i really like the title and i like how the grass looks.

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Comment by Nald:
I think the only thing hurting this shot is the lack of light on your face. A tad more would really give this shot some BANG! Everything else in the frame is working well I think.

guitar
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Comment by christie3:
ack, didn't see this one before, going in my favs right now. :)

guitar
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Comment by Jutilda:
I think taterbug just said everything I was thinking. YOWZA!!! This is ultra fab!