WTC
by lionelm

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

COMPOSITION
The composition here is strong with the two towers of quarters being the primary item of focus and them being located on the left third. The small stacks also adds to the effect.

TECHNIQUE
While I find the green strip at the bottom a little distracting, I don't think eliminating would serve to help. The focus is fine, but the picture does look a little dark to me. I think some colored lights (blue, etc) shining onto the tower at various points would have made this shot a lot more interesting.

OVERALL EFFECT
I think this is a neat idea, it just needs a little more light to be truly effective. Good work.

Best to you in future challenges.
karmat

WTC
by lionelm

Comment by johnny_justjohnny:
with all those dimes, and the patriotic theme, you kinda gotta work the word liberty in there somewhere, eh? but that's just me. this is a nice photo, like the stacks in the horizon, nice touch there.

Before the Storm
by lionelm

Comment by dacrazyrn:
I can see the symmetry in the buildings, but rather bland. I love weather pictures. The clouds are really not very dramatic though.

Before the Storm
by lionelm

Comment by blemt:
Nice capture. I patricularly like the blue sky reflected in the right window.

WTC
by lionelm

Comment by joshua:
interesting statement...1

WTC
by lionelm

Comment by nitro102:
nice idea, a little dark though

Before the Storm
by lionelm

Comment by DennisF:
Or maybe warring kingdoms. Good use of symmetry without overdoing it.

Before the Storm
by lionelm

Comment by jellokitty01:
dont steal old titles, cliches, be original cheap o.

WTC
by lionelm

Comment by sherryk471:
A little too dark but a nice try

Before the Storm
by lionelm

Comment by Lustre:
It's a moody image and I like the contrast between the glass and buildings (both on the left and right buildings). The photo has symmetry without being perfect symmetry, which is a nice interpretation.